First Rule of Writing

Don’t tell your readers who your characters are but reveal your characters by their actions.

Example: 

1. Jenna’s favorite color was pink. She couldn’t get enough of it.                 


2. Jenna stepped out of her apartment feeling glorious. She    pushed her pink rimmed glassed up on her  nose, slung her pink bag over her shoulder and hoped there was no pink lipstick on her teeth.

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